2015高考英语全国卷1|2015届高考英语二轮复习：书面表达（5）
假如你是李晓华，住在江城。你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括下表中的内容。
| 自然情况 | ①位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住 |
| 成就 | ②经济发展迅速 ③新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等。 |
| 存在问题 | ④水、空气污染 ⑤交通拥挤 |
| 对江城发展的看法 | ⑥考生自己拟定 |
注意：1.回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。
2.词数100左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。
参考词汇：经济economy n.
Dear Bob，
It"s very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.
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参考答案
Dear Bob，
It"s very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I"d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.
The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we"ll have a better hometown in future.
Yours，
Xiaohua
【解析】这篇书面表达主要结合要点来写，首先介绍家乡江城的自然情况：The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in.这里的stand表示位于，不定式to live in做定语修饰a beautiful place。然后介绍江城的成就，Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. 这句话中的时态很重要，用现在完成式。More schools and hospitals are available for its people.这里的be available for是“可以获得的”。表达存在问题时，要注意用表示转折的词，像however，such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.举例说明这里用了such as。最后是对江城发展的看法，让考生自己发挥，就要看考生的思维和表达能力了，用In my opinion,引出自己的观点，I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we"ll have a better hometown in future.这句话里面用了be brought under control“控制住…”，so that引导的是目的状语从句。都是很值得学习的。
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2015年高考英语全国卷1 2015天津高考英语
